Hello, I was just wondering is there any difference in scoring of academic and general writing ? I felt, the vocab section in academic test , requires more academic not, candidates will not score a 7 or 8 in it (?????). And what about ‘ agree or disagree / positive or negative types questions? Is it necessary to stick with one side in the opinion paragraph? ie; 2 positive points and 1 negative point. Can I still conclude it as ‘positive’ ? Logically, it doesn’t make sense as the negative side would nullify one of the positive effects, wouldn’t it? Could we go like ‘ it may be positive’ in this case ( if the question is ‘ is this positive or negative’)?
On a positive side,due to the rapid deforestation and depleting natural vegetations, few wild animals are losing their natural homes and are on the verge of zoos provides shelter to such endangered animals and help us avoid losing them ,the zoos provides an excellent oppurtunity to the children and adults aswell to have a close look at the animals which otherwise would be not possible to is very beneficial to the students both from the educations as well as from the entertainment point of importantly,the animals are taken well care off in the zoos with proper living conditions and
However,contrary to the above, there are ample negative aspects of keeping the animals in the zoos which many think are against the will of the animals are denied of their freedom by limiting them to the cages and regularly hounded aby the animals are depriving of their privacies and importantly,there have been numerous cases of animal detahs in zoos resulting due to improper living conditions,food and lack of care by the
Although there are pros and cons of keeping the animals in zoos,a more acceptable approach would to maintain the animals by providing a proper and suitable living conditions to the would result in a win win situation for both the animals as well as the curious